Defining Your Purpose - Tackling the Main Question
“Why do you want to transfer? Why do you want to transfer to Yale?” These two questions will arguably define your transfer application and if you switch out Yale for any other university, their defining characteristic will remain the same. I can attest that answering these questions is a hard task to do and it takes serious reflection and introspection. Initially, when I first approached these questions all I could think of was “I need to transfer out of community college” and “I like Yale.” However, while those thoughts may be good building blocks to begin writing, they in no way captured the desire I felt to transfer and to attend Yale. So, I reflected. I re-read my short essays - already completed - and began to think about how transferring and how attending Yale would fit into that story, why I wanted Yale to fit into that story.
For me, I realized that I looked at life much like I look at a game. You enter new levels constantly - elementary school, middle school, high school, community college - and each level teaches you something about yourself and about the next level you’ll “play” in. You meet new characters along the way, some of which either stay with you throughout the entire game or stay behind, content having helped you during a certain stage. You progress at your own pace and move on to a new level once you’re ready. My main essay ended up being formatted like a game, beginning with: “Round One: Level Selected - Citrus College. Begin the game” and ending with “Continue to Round Two: Level - University? Yes.” As I wrote in that essay, “the idea of once again beginning a new level [was] frightening. Yet at the same time, I [felt] an overwhelming sense of calmness.” Transferring and specifically transferring to Yale was something I viewed as the best move I could make in my “game” and so I expressed it like that, further elaborating on the personal reasons behind that “move”.
However, you don’t have to structure your essay in a fun, creative way if that’s not how you express yourself. You don’t have to think about yourself and your life as a metaphor if that’s not how you perceive things. The main essay is where you - as a person, a student, a sibling, a volunteer, etc. - should shine the most. If anything, think about this essay like a letter to yourself, or better yet, a letter to your future self. Talk about the past moments, memories, and events that are important to you but also look towards the future and express what you hope your life will be like in a year’s time.
Trust the process as cliche as that may sound and with all that said, good luck!